Tention · Faceless Ad v2 · Storyboard — rev 3 (current)
James Ad v2 — Storyboard
REUSE — v1 clip as-is
ADAPT — v1 visual, reworked
NEW — generated draft
Locked rules: no graphic repeats (every motif appears once; B1/B6/B10 are continuous scenes) · 1:1 literal match to the spoken words · montage tiles carry no text (VO + captions say the word) · logo sting is deterministic render, never AI video.
B1Hook — “Show me your invoice”0:00.0 – 0:07.8ONE SCENE — invoice motif lives here only
C10:00.0 → 0:01.41.4sREUSE V1
DTC e-comm brand —
Glass paper-plane flies in. Only plane appearance in the ad.
C20:01.4 → 0:03.82.4sREUSE V2
show me your retention agency's last invoice,
Plane unfolds into the Retention Agency Invoice.
C30:03.8 → 0:06.02.2sREUSE V3
please, so I can tell you how much money you're wasting
Magnifier sweeps line items; red flags flare.
C40:06.0 → 0:07.81.8sNEW
and how much you're overpaying for the service.
Push-in on the red total, counting up. Hard cut out on “service.”
B2Problem A — dormant flows0:07.8 – 0:16.8
C50:07.8 → 0:10.83.0sNEW · v2
And hey, if you're getting a good deal, I'll be the first one to tell you that,
Green FAIR DEAL seal stamps directly into the scene — paper card removed per feedback.
C60:10.8 → 0:14.03.2sADAPT V4
but you're probably paying $3,000, $4,000, $5,000 a month,
v1 price card reset to $3,000 — ticks $3k→$4k→$5k in motion, synced 12.3/12.4/12.9s. Only price-card appearance.
C70:14.0 → 0:16.82.8sNEW
and the flows still haven't been touched since onboarding.
Frozen flow canvas, “Last edited: onboarding” tag.
B3Problem B — pointless strategy calls0:16.8 – 0:25.9
C80:17.1 → 0:19.42.3sNEW
Or you're paying $5,000, $6,000, $7,000 a month,
Receipt printer that won't stop — escalation without repeating C6's card.
C90:19.4 → 0:22.93.5sNEW
and you're doing weekly strategy calls with the team
Recurring “Strategy Call” blocks stamp into the month.
C100:22.9 → 0:25.22.3sREUSE V5
just reading your Klaviyo dashboard back to you.
v1 laptop call + floating dashboard.
C110:25.2 → 0:25.90.7sNEW
Not worth it.
Tipped scale — $7,000 slams down, envelope floats up. Punch cut. Setup for C56's payoff.
B4Where the money actually goes0:25.9 – 0:38.4
C120:25.9 → 0:29.94.0sADAPT V6
You know, expensive retainers don't actually buy you better service or better emails.
v1 coins + flat email card — “growth 40%” label removed.
C130:29.9 → 0:31.51.6sNEW
They really buy office space,
Glass tower rises out of the coins — match-cut from C12.
C140:31.5 → 0:34.42.9sNEW · v2
levels and levels of account management for the agency,
Six identical “Account Management” floors stack past frame top — replaced the org-chart pyramid per feedback.
C150:34.4 → 0:36.62.2sNEW
owners that don't actually do anything,
Empty corner office, chair mid-spin. Deadpan hold.
C160:36.6 → 0:38.41.8sNEW
and the sales team that closed you.
Headset + CLOSED plaque + commission bell. The closer's desk, already vacated.
B5The offer — stripped down, $2,000/mo0:38.4 – 0:47.9
C170:38.4 → 0:39.71.3sREUSE V9
We stripped away all the garbage,
v1 green particle swirl — B4's debris disintegrates and sweeps away.
C180:39.7 → 0:42.12.4sNEW
but of course kept the good work and fulfillment —
Pen nib · envelope · glass chart land intact where the garbage was.
C19–C210:42.1 → 0:47.95.8sADAPT + NEW
full service, email and SMS, design, copy, deliverability — everything for $2,000 a month.
June capability cards pop one per word (Email 43.0 · SMS 43.3 · Design 43.9 · Copy 44.5 · Deliverability 44.8) then condense into $2,000/mo, locking at 47.2s (C21 still shown).
B6The guarantee0:47.9 – 0:55.6HERO BEATONE SCENE — four camera moments
C220:47.9 → 0:50.32.4sNEW
And we guarantee 20% Klaviyo attribution
Dial fills to 20%. No “90 days” spoiler.
C230:50.3 → 0:51.51.2sNEW
within 90 days,
Timeline strip sweeps to Day 90 beneath the dial — appears the moment it's spoken.
C240:51.5 → 0:53.52.0sNEW · v2
or else we pause billing and do not charge you
Billing toggle OFF → $0.00 · Paused. Stray header text removed.
C250:53.5 → 0:55.62.1sNEW · v2
again until that is achieved.
Simplified per feedback: the dial resolves into a single green check. One object, one moment.
B7Any scale — $500k/mo brands pay the same0:55.6 – 1:07.6
C260:56.0 → 0:58.12.1sNEW
Regardless of how big you are, small you are,
Tiny shop vs flagship — identical $2,000 tag under both.
C270:58.1 → 1:00.92.8sNEW
we have brands that are doing upwards of half a million a month,
$500,000 odometer mid-roll — hits at 60.1s.
C281:00.9 → 1:04.03.1sNEW
and they aren't even paying more than $2,000 a month,
Pinned $2,000 tag; revenue bar grows past frame top behind it.
C291:04.0 → 1:07.63.6sNEW
and they're paying much less than what they were to their previous agency.
$6,500 struck through, sliding off; $2,000 stays.
B8Proof stats1:07.6 – 1:20.9
C301:08.3 → 1:11.93.6sNEW
We've handled the flows and campaigns for over 200 DTC e-comm brands.
The brands themselves form the 200+ mosaic — locks at 70.4s.
C311:11.9 → 1:16.24.3sNEW
We've also generated over $100 million in Klaviyo attributed revenue,
Green surge chart cresting $100M — deliberately not another counter.
C321:16.2 → 1:20.94.7sNEW
and we've worked with a lot of different industries within DTC e-comm:
Empty grid fans open, first tile glows — ramp into the montage; C54 closes the loop.
B8Niche montage1:20.9 – 1:41.2~1s per tile, cut on the word
No text on tiles (per feedback) — James's VO + burned captions say each niche as its tile hits. Montage clips get scripted push-in/parallax motion (deterministic), not Seedance.
fashion
C33 · 1:20.9→1:21.7
jewelry
C34 · 1:21.7→1:22.3
beauty
C35 · 1:22.3→1:23.0
supplements
C36 · 1:23.0→1:23.6
health & wellness
C37 · 1:23.6→1:24.4
athleisure
C38 · 1:24.4→1:25.5
western
C39 · 1:25.5→1:26.3
automotive
C40 · 1:26.3→1:27.0
fragrance
C41 · 1:27.0→1:27.7
children
C42 · 1:27.7→1:28.2
feminine
C43 · 1:28.2→1:28.8
intimate
C44 · 1:28.8→1:29.7
21+ consumables
C45 · 1:29.7→1:31.5
food & beverage
C46 · 1:31.5→1:32.4
watches
C47 · 1:32.4→1:33.1
technology
C48 · 1:33.1→1:33.8
video games
C49 · 1:33.8→1:34.6
furniture
C50 · 1:34.6→1:35.1
swimwear
C51 · 1:35.1→1:36.3
outdoors
C52 · 1:36.3→1:37.5
hiking · fishing
C53 · 1:37.5→1:38.4
…many other niches
C54 · 1:38.4→1:41.2 · pull-back to full wall
B9Summary + social proof1:41.2 – 1:50.6
C551:41.2 → 1:44.53.3sNEW · v2
Listen, it's very simple. Most agencies suck and they charge too much.
Grey agency balloons deflating, $5k/$6k/$7k tags — replaced the cracked monoliths per feedback.
C561:44.5 → 1:46.31.8sNEW · v2
We are very good and we're a fair deal,
Scale now perfectly level — the payoff of C11's tipped scale.
C571:46.3 → 1:50.64.3sNEW
and we have lots of client case studies and testimonials to back us.
5-star testimonial pile, staggered pops.
B10CTA — book the call1:50.6 – 2:00ONE SCENE — device journey
C62 (Meet waiting room) cut — C61 holds through “I look forward to meeting you,” then hard cut to the logo sting.
C581:50.6 → 1:52.31.7sNEW
Go ahead, click on this ad,
Cursor taps the ad in a glass phone.
C591:52.3 → 1:53.31.0sNEW
go to the website,
Same phone, site loads.
C601:53.3 → 1:55.01.7sNEW
provide your information,
Form fields tick complete.
C611:55.0 → 1:59.24.2sNEW · extended
and book a Google Meet one-on-one with me at your convenience. I look forward to meeting you.
Slot tap → Booked ✓ Google Meet 1:1 — calm hold through the line (absorbs cut C62).
C631:59.2 → 2:000.8s+NEW · deterministic
Thank you.
Logo sting — deterministic render (columns rise, swoosh sweeps in, light sweep). Pixel-exact mark, no AI video. Current cut: C63_logo_sting_DETERMINISTIC_v1.mp4.